Switch's Super mutant app.
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Switch's Super mutant app.
by Switch Thu Jun 25, 2015 12:37 am
Username: Switch
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:15876684
Steam Profile:http://steamcommunity.com/id/xcf617
Time on server: IF we're talking about the community, since fox started it the first time. IF we're talking about the new
server, only a few days.
Is this a character application, or transfer: Character application
If transfer, what previous roleplay has occured(Gist of it):
What OOC items are you requesting? None.
What IC-Only items are you requesting? None.
Roleplay experiences? I have been roleplaying for over 4-5 years on garry's mod, owning servers, and administrating some. I have had a total of 3-4 supermutants on communitys like Spire, past KWG servers, Windswept, and some other community i can't remember the name of. (something with a Bananna in the name)
Why should you have all this?[One paragraph required] I think I "deserve" this character, as from what I've experienced, I do not see much of something to be afraid of in the wastelands, as of yet, and constantly feel as if the setting isn't really what fallout is supposed to be like. I don't feel any sort of fear as I walk through the wastes by myself, and don't feel any sort of
feelings that I'm going to die, or should be afraid to walk alone, and unarmed through out the wastes.
[Three paragraphs required]Backstory:
'Iron' was a soldier in the master's army in 2160, by Mariposa military base in California. He was a fairly large Super Mutant, standing at 8'9". He was a first generation super mutant, he could -somewhat- speak English and had no knowledge of tactics, emotions, reading, or really anything involving a long train of thoughts. When the vault dweller has defeated the Master in 2162, Iron felt lost. He decided to go with one of the split factions, he chose the one led by Gammornin, and left the state of California behind. He Traveled far, his mutant brethren treated him harshly, few respected Iron. He decided to split off from the small group, and migrate north from his current state of Colorado. He began to encounter a lot more humans than previously, they spewed slurs at him, they were harsh, cruel, some attempted to kill him. He began to view the human race as a cruel, hateful and stupid race.
He gained many stereotypical views against them, and deemed them worthy to be killed on sight.
Iron, not being accepted by his mutant brethren walked aimlessly, moving through the states as a loner, his sanity dropping far below his original levels. He began seeing visions, going almost insane as he wandered the wastes,beginning to gain memory loss issues, and hallucinations. He began getting blood thirsty- eating the humans he killed, gaining schizophrenic traits..He gained a second personality in his head, (somewhat like Dog in Dead Money.) He soon began attacking fellow Super Mutants who who confronted him, his inner voice telling him to. He began to get afraid of the voice in his head, following it's orders like he was a slave. Each day, his illness got worse, and worse. His lack of contact making it far worse than previously thought.
Iron wanted to be isolated from humans, and super-mutants alike. He found multiple homes in his travels, but humans soon found theres near his, and he soon migrated away from each home he made. He wandered hopelessly, being tormented by his mental illnesses. During his travels, he had multiple encounters with humans, each ending with a violent act, and the human ending up dead. He steered away
from towns, citys, camps, ect. He finally found a small shack in the middle of nowhere, no humans could be seen in his vision, and he soon laid back, and stayed in the area creating his home. His mental illnesses continued to torture and torment him, days went by slowly, and painfully.
What are your perks/skills? Don't really have any.
What are your faults/flaws? Schizophrenic, Short-term, and long-term memory loss. Almost completely stupid, Dual personality,
hates being around people, ect. The list of mental illnesses goes on, and on.
Character traits: None.
(Optional)Character Description: A muscular dark green skinned super mutant, standing at 8'9. He has dark yellow teeth, and
multiple chains wrapped around his wrists, and neck. He has multiple scars on his body, and speaks with a sluggish, stupid tone.
Passive RP(15 Lines required):**Iron would stare at the fire, he fumbles with his thumbs as he hears a light creek coming from
his shack.
**He turns around, facing the house as he stands up. He slowly shuffles into the house, and stops, a light shuffling is heard from the
room to his right, he then shuffles toward the room, a small radroach being inside.
**He stares at the mutant, slowly bending down and grabbing it, he crushes it within his large hand with ease, then walking back to the fire as if it were a normal routine.
**He tosses it on the fire, then sitting back down and staring at the sky, he thinks to himself, and admires the beauty in the earth even in it's time of hate, and chaos.
**He checks on the radroach every now and then, making sure it isnt burning, he then stands up, walking off toward a small bunch of trees in the distance.
**He approaches the trees, ripping branches off, peeling off chips of bark, ect.
** He then begins placing the branches in small piles around him, moving deeper into the small forest.
**During this, he sees a small puddle, he approaches it and crouches low.
**Iron would slurp from the irradiated puddle of water, wiping his mouth when finished.
**He then walks back to his medium sized pile of sticks, placing them in a leather satchel that lays at his side, walking up back
toward the fire.
**Iron would sit back down at the fire, he pulls the dead roach from the fire, setting it on the ground next to him
** Iron slowly pushes the sticks that are currently in the fire around, creating sparks, amazed at this.
**Iron would place more sticks on the fire, He begins seeing visions of males in the darkness around him, he throws stick toward them, they completely pass through them.
**Multiple voices fill his head as if he were to be in a crowd of yelling people, laughing at him.
** He grips each side of his head, yelling at them to stop as he falls into fetal position, groaning and yelling.
**Iron would begin to whimper, laying in a ball as he slowly dozes off, falling asleep.
Combat RP(15 Lines required): ** 'Iron' grips tight onto his Hunting Rifle, letting out monsterous breath as he looks down
towards the Leather-Clad Wastelander.
** 'Iron' slouches down, aiming down the rifle's iron sight. As tge nab gets closter, he fires a shot towards his direction.
** The Wastelander is hit in his torso, panicking and rushing towards a small pillar for cover. A few clicks could be heard from his
direction as he stays in cover.
** 'Iron' takes two shots at the pillar, waving his head around to get a good look at the Wastelander.
** The Wastelander fires a quick bursts from his Laser Pistol at the Mutant's direction. The shots would have bad aim as he would be blind firing.
** 'Iron' is hit in his left thigh, though toughing it out. He fires two more shots at the man in cover and then would attempt to move at a new angle towards the small mound of sandbags.
** The Wastelander is still protected by the small pillar, groaning in pain from his wound. He stands there idle, looking around and waiting to get a more clear shot at the Super Mutant.
** 'Iron' runs over to the sandbags successfully. He checks his rifle and reloads the mag, ducking in cover to see the Wastelander.
** The Wastelander panicks as he notices the Mutant once more, attempting to drag himself on the other side of the Pillar.
** 'Iron' lifts himself up and takes a shot, aiming at the man's chest.
** The Wastelander is hit in the chest, stopping his movement and laying there with his back rested on the pillar.
** 'Iron' hops over the sandbags and slings his rifle on his back. He pounds his fist together, showing off his yellow teeth and he
towers infront of the man.
** The Wastelander would rush his hands towards his belt, attempting to un-clip a Frag grenade from it
.
** 'Iron' would swing his arm up, letting it down onto the man's skull attempting to kill him
.
** The Wastelander would take the hit, then having his crushed skull plop down onto the concrete. He is now dead due to the heavy blow.
** 'Iron' weakens his big grin, and pushes the corpse to the side,
Notes: Sorry for the lack of detail in these roleplay lines, I'm not too good at making lines of roleplay off the top of my
head, I tend to go off topic with such things due to ADD. usually just go off events that occur icly.
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:15876684
Steam Profile:http://steamcommunity.com/id/xcf617
Time on server: IF we're talking about the community, since fox started it the first time. IF we're talking about the new
server, only a few days.
Is this a character application, or transfer: Character application
If transfer, what previous roleplay has occured(Gist of it):
What OOC items are you requesting? None.
What IC-Only items are you requesting? None.
Roleplay experiences? I have been roleplaying for over 4-5 years on garry's mod, owning servers, and administrating some. I have had a total of 3-4 supermutants on communitys like Spire, past KWG servers, Windswept, and some other community i can't remember the name of. (something with a Bananna in the name)
Why should you have all this?[One paragraph required] I think I "deserve" this character, as from what I've experienced, I do not see much of something to be afraid of in the wastelands, as of yet, and constantly feel as if the setting isn't really what fallout is supposed to be like. I don't feel any sort of fear as I walk through the wastes by myself, and don't feel any sort of
feelings that I'm going to die, or should be afraid to walk alone, and unarmed through out the wastes.
[Three paragraphs required]Backstory:
'Iron' was a soldier in the master's army in 2160, by Mariposa military base in California. He was a fairly large Super Mutant, standing at 8'9". He was a first generation super mutant, he could -somewhat- speak English and had no knowledge of tactics, emotions, reading, or really anything involving a long train of thoughts. When the vault dweller has defeated the Master in 2162, Iron felt lost. He decided to go with one of the split factions, he chose the one led by Gammornin, and left the state of California behind. He Traveled far, his mutant brethren treated him harshly, few respected Iron. He decided to split off from the small group, and migrate north from his current state of Colorado. He began to encounter a lot more humans than previously, they spewed slurs at him, they were harsh, cruel, some attempted to kill him. He began to view the human race as a cruel, hateful and stupid race.
He gained many stereotypical views against them, and deemed them worthy to be killed on sight.
Iron, not being accepted by his mutant brethren walked aimlessly, moving through the states as a loner, his sanity dropping far below his original levels. He began seeing visions, going almost insane as he wandered the wastes,beginning to gain memory loss issues, and hallucinations. He began getting blood thirsty- eating the humans he killed, gaining schizophrenic traits..He gained a second personality in his head, (somewhat like Dog in Dead Money.) He soon began attacking fellow Super Mutants who who confronted him, his inner voice telling him to. He began to get afraid of the voice in his head, following it's orders like he was a slave. Each day, his illness got worse, and worse. His lack of contact making it far worse than previously thought.
Iron wanted to be isolated from humans, and super-mutants alike. He found multiple homes in his travels, but humans soon found theres near his, and he soon migrated away from each home he made. He wandered hopelessly, being tormented by his mental illnesses. During his travels, he had multiple encounters with humans, each ending with a violent act, and the human ending up dead. He steered away
from towns, citys, camps, ect. He finally found a small shack in the middle of nowhere, no humans could be seen in his vision, and he soon laid back, and stayed in the area creating his home. His mental illnesses continued to torture and torment him, days went by slowly, and painfully.
What are your perks/skills? Don't really have any.
What are your faults/flaws? Schizophrenic, Short-term, and long-term memory loss. Almost completely stupid, Dual personality,
hates being around people, ect. The list of mental illnesses goes on, and on.
Character traits: None.
(Optional)Character Description: A muscular dark green skinned super mutant, standing at 8'9. He has dark yellow teeth, and
multiple chains wrapped around his wrists, and neck. He has multiple scars on his body, and speaks with a sluggish, stupid tone.
Passive RP(15 Lines required):**Iron would stare at the fire, he fumbles with his thumbs as he hears a light creek coming from
his shack.
**He turns around, facing the house as he stands up. He slowly shuffles into the house, and stops, a light shuffling is heard from the
room to his right, he then shuffles toward the room, a small radroach being inside.
**He stares at the mutant, slowly bending down and grabbing it, he crushes it within his large hand with ease, then walking back to the fire as if it were a normal routine.
**He tosses it on the fire, then sitting back down and staring at the sky, he thinks to himself, and admires the beauty in the earth even in it's time of hate, and chaos.
**He checks on the radroach every now and then, making sure it isnt burning, he then stands up, walking off toward a small bunch of trees in the distance.
**He approaches the trees, ripping branches off, peeling off chips of bark, ect.
** He then begins placing the branches in small piles around him, moving deeper into the small forest.
**During this, he sees a small puddle, he approaches it and crouches low.
**Iron would slurp from the irradiated puddle of water, wiping his mouth when finished.
**He then walks back to his medium sized pile of sticks, placing them in a leather satchel that lays at his side, walking up back
toward the fire.
**Iron would sit back down at the fire, he pulls the dead roach from the fire, setting it on the ground next to him
** Iron slowly pushes the sticks that are currently in the fire around, creating sparks, amazed at this.
**Iron would place more sticks on the fire, He begins seeing visions of males in the darkness around him, he throws stick toward them, they completely pass through them.
**Multiple voices fill his head as if he were to be in a crowd of yelling people, laughing at him.
** He grips each side of his head, yelling at them to stop as he falls into fetal position, groaning and yelling.
**Iron would begin to whimper, laying in a ball as he slowly dozes off, falling asleep.
Combat RP(15 Lines required): ** 'Iron' grips tight onto his Hunting Rifle, letting out monsterous breath as he looks down
towards the Leather-Clad Wastelander.
** 'Iron' slouches down, aiming down the rifle's iron sight. As tge nab gets closter, he fires a shot towards his direction.
** The Wastelander is hit in his torso, panicking and rushing towards a small pillar for cover. A few clicks could be heard from his
direction as he stays in cover.
** 'Iron' takes two shots at the pillar, waving his head around to get a good look at the Wastelander.
** The Wastelander fires a quick bursts from his Laser Pistol at the Mutant's direction. The shots would have bad aim as he would be blind firing.
** 'Iron' is hit in his left thigh, though toughing it out. He fires two more shots at the man in cover and then would attempt to move at a new angle towards the small mound of sandbags.
** The Wastelander is still protected by the small pillar, groaning in pain from his wound. He stands there idle, looking around and waiting to get a more clear shot at the Super Mutant.
** 'Iron' runs over to the sandbags successfully. He checks his rifle and reloads the mag, ducking in cover to see the Wastelander.
** The Wastelander panicks as he notices the Mutant once more, attempting to drag himself on the other side of the Pillar.
** 'Iron' lifts himself up and takes a shot, aiming at the man's chest.
** The Wastelander is hit in the chest, stopping his movement and laying there with his back rested on the pillar.
** 'Iron' hops over the sandbags and slings his rifle on his back. He pounds his fist together, showing off his yellow teeth and he
towers infront of the man.
** The Wastelander would rush his hands towards his belt, attempting to un-clip a Frag grenade from it
.
** 'Iron' would swing his arm up, letting it down onto the man's skull attempting to kill him
.
** The Wastelander would take the hit, then having his crushed skull plop down onto the concrete. He is now dead due to the heavy blow.
** 'Iron' weakens his big grin, and pushes the corpse to the side,
Notes: Sorry for the lack of detail in these roleplay lines, I'm not too good at making lines of roleplay off the top of my
head, I tend to go off topic with such things due to ADD. usually just go off events that occur icly.
Switch- Vault Dweller
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Join date : 2015-06-24
Re: Switch's Super mutant app.
by Infidel Fri Jun 26, 2015 1:36 am
+Support. Known him for a while, he's a good role player. He'll be able to handle himself with this character. He ain't askin' for a Minigun and shit, just a Super Mutie, and I think that'll create more diversity in the server.
Infidel- Vault Outcast
- Posts : 22
Join date : 2015-06-25
Re: Switch's Super mutant app.
by FlameCow Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:44 am
It's a good application. There are minor grammatical mistakes, mostly in the role play sections. The backstory was cohesive, though some details are missing or questionable; I think it could have used another paragraph. I don't think wilderness isolation is enough to make someone crazy or bloodthirsty, but if he already had schizophrenia then it's within reason.
More super mutants is always good. I think there needs to be more hostile and dangerous character applications, since the majority have been for 'good guys'.
+support, just watch the typos in-game
More super mutants is always good. I think there needs to be more hostile and dangerous character applications, since the majority have been for 'good guys'.
+support, just watch the typos in-game
FlameCow- Wasteland Demi-God
- Posts : 477
Join date : 2013-07-12
Age : 30
Re: Switch's Super mutant app.
by Switch Sun Jun 28, 2015 6:48 pm
FlameCow wrote:It's a good application. There are minor grammatical mistakes, mostly in the role play sections. The backstory was cohesive, though some details are missing or questionable; I think it could have used another paragraph. I don't think wilderness isolation is enough to make someone crazy or bloodthirsty, but if he already had schizophrenia then it's within reason.
More super mutants is always good. I think there needs to be more hostile and dangerous character applications, since the majority have been for 'good guys'.
+support, just watch the typos in-game
Don't usually make typos frequently. It was late when I scrapped this up, didn't try too hard on the grammar. Thank you though, for the support!
Switch- Vault Dweller
- Posts : 6
Join date : 2015-06-24
Re: Switch's Super mutant app.
by Captain Snyder Wed Jul 01, 2015 8:02 pm
Accepted, but remember.
You cannot be friendly towards humans, you may remain neutral and ignore them or decide not to fight them. But you are not friendly.
You cannot be friendly towards humans, you may remain neutral and ignore them or decide not to fight them. But you are not friendly.
Captain Snyder- Overseer
- Posts : 604
Join date : 2013-06-09
Age : 25
Location : Somewhere in Texas
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